25 May 2013

Talos I

This is the first part of a multi-part section, perhaps the first real chapter that I'll be working on, as most of the stuff that I've worked on thusfar has been more conceptual than it has been real writing meant to be published.  This would be in the first third to half, somewhere around there.  I imagine that I'd start in the ancestral capital (which I don't yet have a name for), and then the focus would move over to the new capital for a bit, which it where this takes place.  Then other stuff happens and the focus would start moving around.  How does that sound?  Also, I'm thinking of updating this biweekly instead of just once a week, updating every Wednesday and Saturday, instead of just Saturday.  Any thoughts?



Talos had never been to this “new capital.”  Frankly, he had thought it improper, to move away from their homeland, as it had been for hundreds of years prior, nearing even a thousand years as the center of the world and their illustrious empire, never minding that for most of its history, it remained nothing more than a singular city, a trade hub at best.  It was the home of their ancestors, and that was enough for Talos.  However, the Princeps had a giant palace complex built here and moved his entire governing staff, for reasons that it was so much closer to imminent military threats. Sacrilege, thought Talos.

However, he could not help but notice how grand the entire palace had become, with larger buildings of marble than he had ever seen.  It seemed amazing to think that just twenty years ago, within his very lifetime, this city was a mere collection of stinky huts sitting upon a couple of hills, now a sprawling complex housing the administration to govern the entirety of the civilized world and barracks enough to house thousands of soldiers, ready to march to where ‘ere they may be needed.  Even within the Princeps’ living chambers, everything was done to a grand scale.  The covered walkway he hastened down flanked him with two sets of columns, each some five feet wide and twenty tall, elevating a ceiling elaborately painted to appear as though tree branches stretched overhead on a summer’s day, each column a thick trunk supporting the canopy.  Talos doubted that anyone actually cared to look at it any longer.

At long last he reached the end of the hall, the doorway into the large room in which he was to meet the Princeps, the door flanked by four guards, the personal Agema of the Princeps, wearing their palace garb.  Each of them wore a tunic of bright white, sleeves and base lined with a band of crimson, and an ivory coloured chlamys pinned to their shoulders, partly concealing the soft leather armour they wore upon their chests, and entire calves checkered with the bands of leather sandals.  At one time they were forbidden from carrying weapons, but this new capital had no such sacred law that had to be abided by, and they all wore their distinctive Kopis at their sides.

One of them stepped forward with one palm outwards and the other resting comfortably on the pommel of his sword.  His voice was gruff, but it wasn't foreign or ill-spoken, a relief.  At least the personal guard hadn't changed with this new location.  “Where do you think you mean to go with such celerity?”

All the same, Talos was quite irritated.  He had not the patience at the moment to deal with these low-brow soldiers.  Surely they could see the purple band on his robes which marked his nobility?  He almost snapped back, “Surely you know where I mean, through this door to meet with your master.  I have not made my way here by means of horse and ship over so great a time and distance from the homes of our ancestors just so that I may be questioned frivolously.”  The guard lumbered slowly towards him without saying a word, a grimace having been struck across his face; obvious with the intent to intimidate the newcomer, but he failed on two accounts.  First, his breath had ever so slightly the sour, vinegar-like odour of old, cheap wine.  He’d obviously drank before his shift, feeling it necessary to get through it.

Secondly, Talos was simply bigger than the guard.  To become one of the Agema, one had to be quite tall, from a certain ethnicity, having at least one testicle, and a myriad of other attributes, supreme examples of what it meant to be a man all.  Talos was still bigger; he was taller than most men and somewhat thinner in frame, though not without obvious muscle.  His skin was of an olive tone, and his hair a light brown highlighted with blonde from the sun’s caress, his light stubble of a beard taking more this attribute.  His face had definite structure, with a strong jaw and cheek bones, with somewhat heavy brows, giving shade to his golden-hazel eyes which almost glimmered in the sunlight.

Nor was he a stranger to the field of battle, having participated in more than one campaign himself.  He would not be cowed so easily, staring down contemptuously as the Agema stared back up at him.  The guard started to pull out the blade from its scabbard, but Talos didn't let it move an inch before his hand was upon the man’s wrist, preventing it from moving any further.  Realistically, it was all a game, all a bluff, each man seeking to out-bluff the other and prove himself the more dominant figure.  This man was used to doing this on an individual basis but Talos was used to doing this as both a battlefield commander and a politician, where one’s opponent would not cede so easily, even if it meant their life or even the lives of thousands of others.  They stood there, eyes locked and hand on wrist, the remaining guard starting to become uneasy, restless, but saying nothing.

A voice called out from the room behind, sounding soft and kindly, but yet with a determination in it at the same time, “Talos Valerius Magnus, my old fiend, how good of you to come on such short notice.  Do come in, have a seat and refresh yourself.”  Talos released his hand from the Agema and looked forward into the next room, stepping around him without looking back at the man until once in the room, where he stopped and looked back

Still standing there was his personal slave, his valet, a thin aging man with grey-brown beard and balding head, a long tunic draping to his ankles.  He’s stopped as the now fuming Agema had turned his gaze and attention on the hapless slave.  He commanded, “Come Miko!  Ignore this citizen.”  Immediately the man scurried in after his master.

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